Thursday, March 31, 2011

Comics Final Draft

This is my final draft of my comic book. I edited it a little bit. This is the same comic book I've been working on for a while. I really enjoyed making the characters come to life in this comic book. I tried to make this all one story not a series of different stories.










3 comments:

  1. I don't get who Maddi is in the story, but I like the way you introduced Alizee at the end acting as the hero. It leaves a cliffhanger and makes me want to read the next one you do! Your storyline was also creative, you captured people's extreme facial expressions and body movements. Even without the blurb I could tell that Reid is evil and that Carlos is scared just from their face.

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  2. I think that these comics are good, but it would help to not use the same photos more than once and for different parts of the story. The photo with Noah, Owen and Jessica is the strongest out of all of them.

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  3. Good work, but once again I wouldve liked to see more of a story in your comics. Goood pictures though!

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