this one is so long! i really like how you kept going with this and continued on the same path as the beginning. i also think it is funny how most of the time the people in these photos do not know that they are being photographed for this! it makes it more interesting to me to think about that.
I think you developed your idea further and all the photos came together quite well. Your storyline is really funny, although I think you could have added how Reid suddenly came in to be the new teacher. You did a great job with capturing the right emotions and making the models look natural instead of being posed for the camera. Since your last photo is of Maddi, saying "Hahahaha" I'm assuming she is going to be the next villain?
You did a good job capturing different events and emotions and making them fit in your story. You developed this well from your first draft, maybe you could just add a little more context for your captions.
I like how you used facial expression and the comic format to tell a story. I also really like the pictures you took of Jessica and Noah, they are really funny looking and made me laugh looking at them, especially the one of Noah.
good work, but once again i think it would be better if your stories were longer and had more action in them. they are good concepts but i feel like there is nothing going on. keep up the good work!
I really like these photos because every shot really goes with the story and the people look like they are exclaiming something when you put the speech bubble and thinking something when you put the thought bubble. Good job!
this one is so long! i really like how you kept going with this and continued on the same path as the beginning. i also think it is funny how most of the time the people in these photos do not know that they are being photographed for this! it makes it more interesting to me to think about that.
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ReplyDeleteI think you developed your idea further and all the photos came together quite well. Your storyline is really funny, although I think you could have added how Reid suddenly came in to be the new teacher. You did a great job with capturing the right emotions and making the models look natural instead of being posed for the camera. Since your last photo is of Maddi, saying "Hahahaha" I'm assuming she is going to be the next villain?
ReplyDeleteYou did a good job capturing different events and emotions and making them fit in your story. You developed this well from your first draft, maybe you could just add a little more context for your captions.
ReplyDeleteI like how you used facial expression and the comic format to tell a story. I also really like the pictures you took of Jessica and Noah, they are really funny looking and made me laugh looking at them, especially the one of Noah.
ReplyDeletegood work, but once again i think it would be better if your stories were longer and had more action in them. they are good concepts but i feel like there is nothing going on. keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteI really like these photos because every shot really goes with the story and the people look like they are exclaiming something when you put the speech bubble and thinking something when you put the thought bubble. Good job!
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